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24 notes - 6 years ago

#THAT FACE IS SO GREAT GOD BLESS #IF I MAY SAY THOUGH THE PERSPECTIVE IN THAT PANEL IS SLIGHTLY WONKY #AND HER FACE IN THE SECOND PANEL DOESN’T LOOK MUCH LIKE THE FACE IN THE FIRST BECAUSE OF THE SHORTER CHIN #ALSO HER NECK MIGHT BE TOO THIN IN THAT SECOND PANEL??? #IDK I HOPE YOU DON’T MIND;;;

I don’t mind! I thrive on feedback and I really hadn’t noticed these things until you brought them up, so thank you!! 

I was planning on just leaving this page be, moving on and paying better attention to these things in the future, but then I noticed a major continuity error in this page (her missing pulled back hair, which I can’t believe I actually forgot) that I absolutely can’t let sit, so I’ll probably go back and fix a couple things in here. 

(Source: darlingcomic, via i-amnot-oneofyourstories-deacti)

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