I added that gosh darned little ponytail and tried lining up her features between the first and second panels a little more. The contour of her hair made her neck in the second panel seem pretty thin, so I tried emphasizing the overlap between the hair and neck so it stopped seeming that way.

Let me know if anything still seems glaringly off! Though I probably won’t go back and change this page again, I’ll still greatly appreciate any flaws being brought to my attention as it’ll help me to figure out my own weak points.

(Source: darlingcomic)